Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, March 5, 2019
Harry Potter and the Philosopher's/Sorcerer's Stone~
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Hello Pandora
ReplyDelete1. I really like how you know lots about Harry Potter.
2. When I read your post I liked that you added your own rating.
3. Maybe you could add a wee bit more info about Harry Potter and what was your favouirte part of chapter five?
Thank you so much~! I tried to add as much information as I could, but the text-box didn't fit, i'll try and shrink it as much as I can.
DeleteHi Pandora you could maybe change the font colour on the 1 slide it is a little hard to read
ReplyDeleteAlright! Thanks for the advice :)
DeleteI liked the part when you wrote something about all of the characters. Next time you could make the fonts a different colour so they are easier to read.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm on it!
DeleteTroll snot... EW!
ReplyDeleteVery ew.
DeleteI hate troll snot. but your report was amazing Panda
ReplyDeleteAgreed. And thanks!
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