Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, June 14, 2018
Hello!
4 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia Ora my name is Dante from Red Hill School,I like how you put how many pets you have, but what are there names? Next post can you put a better name for your post.
ReplyDeleteThank you, your comment was very helpful. I will be sure to use your feedback in my next post.
DeleteKia ora Pandora I am Tayla a year 5 from Marshland School you pets sound really cute i wish i had that many pets i only have 2 goldfish! but maybe next time you could name the pets bye for now.
ReplyDelete-Tayla :)
kia ora Pandora my name is Nikita from Marshland school you have so cool and cut pets i what them
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